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It Pays to Be Honest Nowadays the society has been crowed into a host of dishonest phenomenon.Such as some people take a business without any pay ,one of college students is absent from the course with a lie and so on.It has made a negative effect on our dairy life .Therefore honesty is such significant for creating a harmonious and beautiful atmosphere .