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2011年12月英语六级作文真题:成功之路

发布时间:2013-05-18 10:48浏览次数:3007
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题目 The Way to Success
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1.For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes

2.Write a short essay entitled The Way Success

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Everyone's fantasy in the world is to success which make your whole life significant ,there are a lot of ways to success Take yuminhong for example,even thought he was born in the country who lack of breaks to communicate with english native people which has a bad impact on his oral english,but he 's tough,even with low means and poor pronounciation he has but nothing can stop him pursuing his dream to speak with amerians fluently ,he recite over 8 dictionary which over 80 thousand english words during his college time in peaking university,day in and day out ,he ape the tape player over and over again in the campus jungle to improve his pronounciation,after years of toil,he crack his to way to success of speaking internetional language eglish which lay the foundation of his way to open up a english teaching corperation of new concept english. In that case we conclude that success rely on some aspects,first IQ ,but it's nature we can't change our IQ,second working hard,this is the factor that we can control,as we can see ,yuminhong working hard for a long time ,that's his key to open the door of success ,third,honest,because of his honest so that he makes a lot friends who later work with him to create the corperation so he can success.

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