2011年12月英语四级作文真题:坚强的意志

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Nothing Succeeds Without a Strong will We always failed doing someting.However ,we all know that because we do not have strong will.If we want to do someting well ,we should have a strong will. Only that who has a strong will can finish the great mission. The strong will is the key to open the door of success.AS a student ,What should we do? If we did not study hard ,we could not get good score and were useless.