2011年12月英语四级作文真题:坚强的意志

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Nothing Succeeds Without a Strong will We always failed to do something.However,we all know that because we do not have a strong will.If we want to do something well ,we should have a strong will. Only that who has a strong will can finish the great mission. The strong will is the key to open the door of success.AS a student,What should we do? If we did not study hard,we could not get good score and were useless.