2011年12月英语六级作文真题:成功之路

文中词汇表达比较多样，能多用学术词汇就更好了；作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用。

The Way to Success As the saying goes "all roads lead to Rome." The pressure to get a good job is as big as possible, but we should not lose ourselves. for us , it is important to know the strong points and weak points well. Then, the combination of interest and strong point will inspire you to achieve the success. how to know yourself well? you will never know it until you have a try. For example, you have a much higher grade than your classmates in English writing which reflects you have better ability in English expressing. If you like to spread your own opinions to others, you can exercise more till you have an original style. Fortunately, your style has a big market, if not, you also can hunt a job related to English writing,such as a teacher for english writing. At last , everyone can be successful. it is dependent on your understanding for success. For me , success means you can do something useful to the society even not big.