2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

句法知识很棒，若增加一些从句的使用，文章会更出色；文中能使用多样的词汇表达，也能较好的使用一些学术词汇；行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用。

Nowadays,computer become increasingly widespread.Especially,young people like compter.In college,many students have personal computer，and they are accustomed to use computer in almost of every aspect.However,they are too depend on computer too without it. The following reasons possible account for this issue.Firstly,young people easily learn to computer,but they also likely indulge in computer games.Secondly,college students don't know how to learn by themsleves.So they always play computer games or chatting on the Internet to kill the boring time.Thirdly,the most of university teachers require his students to do home work with computer ,and then they will submit it by email.Besiders they will neglect handwrting. In my part, we should take advantage of the computers and avoid the disadvantage of the computer.What's more ,I believe we can seek a perfect measure to deal with the man and computer relationship.