2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

有效地采用了多种衔接方法，层次清晰；文中有几处句子错误；文中能较熟练地使用一定的学术词汇，但词汇表达多样性不高，拼写检查还需加强。

Man and Computer With society”s devoloping, more and more families brough a computer in their house, they suppose it”s convient. But now, the computer is begining to think like man, and man think like the computer. It”s dangerious? Then we took a survey, the result is this: Some people suppose that the computer think like man is good, the reason is that the computer can do anything to help man, and man without do anything, they just to relax, at last,man needn’t to work ,without pressure, and eat food not use their hand and so on, they are eajoyable. Howerev other people don’t agree with it ,they suggest that it will influence man’s status,and then the computer will be man’s master; on the other hand, the computer help man do their anything, and then the man will more and more lazy, they give up activity. What’s worse, when the man give up though, they will be like a computer without though. As far as I’m concerned,people used computer should propert ,the computer is just a tool, it’s only to help us to work, not instead of us to work,the more we though, the more help us. So don’t let you think like a computer, please though a more by yourself.