2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

可适当增加从句和复杂句使用；作者用词生动多样，请继续努力，希望能更灵活地使用学术词汇；全文结构较为严谨，应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。

Computer and Man Computer is more and more important for people's daily life. without going outside, you can know everything about the world, go shopping and communcate with others. At the same time, it has changed our habits day by day. The original intention of the inventor of computer is to create an instrument which can make lives much easier than before. Therefore, a rational person will let computer to control his or her life. when we get information and do other things on line, we should pay attention to the surrounding of us. We can draw a conclusion form the above discussion that the balance between vitual world and real world must be made in our mind. Undoubtedly, computer technology will grow fast even beyond your imagiantion. But what we should bear in mind is that no matter how powerful it is, it can not replace the real world.