2009年12月英语四级作文真题:建设绿色校园

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It is very important for us to creat a green campus.Creating a green campus is not only good for our study but our health.In addition,the green campus is not just a green enviroment, what's more important is the good study amophes and health thoughts. In order to build a green campus,we are supposed to build good habbits,such as not dropping the litter,planting the trees,saving the water.And we should try our best to do better.