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写信人:Wang Haiyang 写信人E-mail地址:wanghaiyang@hotmail.com 写信时间:2008年12月23 13 We are recives 3000 pieces form your company on 22 December,but according to our signing of the NO.35 order ,it should be 3500 pieces of goods ,we are not recived other 500 pieces until today.plese check your product list ,We are looking forward to your early reply!