2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

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With the development of technology and science,computers have more and more functions which plays an essential role in our life.To say computers and man,they are becoming more closer than before.It is a little bit terrified if the man don't have computers,in similar,if computers that no one can use which can not show their values. Computers are important to the man,in this way,there also exists many