2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

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My Views on Online Shopping Nowadays it has became a fashion way of online shopping.Not only does the teens like shopping online but the young people even if the older.They would like to get something weather expensive or cheap from online stores. Although there is lots of advantages of online shopping,it is so convenient and comfortable that we just need click the mouse.However it is no doubt there is still some shortcoming comparing online shopping with shopping in reality.Like we may be cheat by sales.And we do not know the quality of the product.And sometimes it needs a long time while expressing. In my opinion,it is a blade of online shopping.We could buy something we can not get easy.Be careful when we are shopping online.