2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；作者词汇表达较丰富多样，学术词汇使用较熟练；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用。

Computer and Man Undoubtedly, computer has been more and more important in our daily life. Thanks to it, shopping, communication and getting information is more convenient than before. It naturally follows that man's habits have been changed a lot by it both positively and negatively. So we should balance them well in my eyes. Computer has been largely and widely in many aspects in our life. When it makes our lives much easier than any period in history, many other problems come with it at the same time such as internet addiction, social phobias ,etc. It draws a hot discussion on it. Some people hold passive attitude towards it, while others think that computer is of active effects for us totally. In my opinnions, the great impact of computer is irreplaceble. A coin has two sides that the development of a new technology is born to be with many problems. The only thing we can do is balance.