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2012年12月英语六级作文真题(I):保持信任

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题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任

字数:150满分:100分

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On maintaining trust The news about food safety affair, voice phishing , the decline of government credibility and so on is not fresh to people. As is known to all, credibility is the basement of everything. After thirty years of open and reform policy, when we take a life with great material progress, we painfully find that credibility is gradually lost in our lives.So some steps should be taken. Firstly, the hole society should pay attention to the importance of trust that good people and good deeds must be prasied a lot and the people and deeds against trust also need to be exposured. Secondly, as "everything is based on credibility" is written into law, it is a high time for law to play a big role in integrity. Thirdly, a thousand miles begins with a single step, everything done by following the spirit of faith from taday. In conclusion, people can not live without trust. Therefore, it is our turn to maintain trust.

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