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There is ,recently,a debated topic that "Should one expect a reward when doing a good deed."Does anyone hold the same attitude towards" one should expect a reward when doing a good deed"? Definitely not,different persons have different attitudes. For these who uphold the opinion that one should expect a reward when doing a good deed claim that ,firstly , when one does a good deed ,he should get reward so that others have passion to contribute to people . That is the reseaon why the WTV hold the program called " Move Chinese". Secondly ,today ,people should get payment for their work. However,others maintain that we shouldn't expect a reward when doing a good deed.We should learn from Leifeng.For the one thing,that doing a good deed is our traditional culture.Moreover,there is no meaning that in order to getting a reward ,people do some good deeds. For my standpoint, doing a good deed should get others' respect.While we can't do some things in purpose of expecting a reward.