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2006年6月英语六级作文真题:关于旅游

发布时间:2013-05-14 23:33浏览次数:1989
要求:
1、近十年来某城市越来越多人选择出去旅游 
2、出现这种现象的原因 

3、这种现象可能产生的影响 

表格:

1995   2000  2005 
1万人   近4万 12万以上 

用户的作文(系统评分69.5分
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句式灵活多变,再加强从句的使用会更棒;文章层次较为清晰;作者词汇量比较丰富,一些学术词汇的使用也比较灵活,但要避免出现拼写错误。

用户练习作文:

From the chart we can tell that the population of traveling abroad has increased quickly in this city. It rise from 10 thousand to 120 thousand in the past decade, the speed is unbelievable. There is no denying the fact that it has become a prevailing trend for people to travle abroad, there are various reasons. One obvious reason is that the level of the living standard of those people have improved in a great extent, the places of interest in their own country can't make them satisfied, they need travel abroad to seek for excitement.Maybe another reason is that there are more and more people travle abroad,that has become a proud thing for those people, they may think people will look down on them just because they never travle abroad. As far as I am concerned, the crazy about travling abroad may help to develope foreign economy, it has little benefit to their own country. Personally speaking, I would rather travle domestic than abroad, and it cheaper.

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