若注意文中一些句法错误,文章会更不错;作者使用词汇表达不都灵魂,需要多使用一些学术词汇;文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词,结构比较严谨;可以适当增加副词的使用。
Nowadays English is a common language around the world,more and more children start to learn English,and some children have fluent English,but most of them don't pay much concern to their spelling. The causes for the reason is that Nowadays the oral English get a high position,some parents think that the reading, writting,speaking ,listening is important;besides,withe the development of network,the children type words in computer,so they seldom practice the spelling. I think the parents and teacher should pay much attention to the spelling,a good spelling will leave a clear