小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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Betty is my good friend. She's fourteen years old and she's an Canadian. We are in the same class - Class Four, Grade Seven. She is good at singing and dancing. I like to play with Betty a lot. I wish our friendship could last forever.she is my good friend.