2006年6月英语六级作文真题:关于旅游

文中应增加一些长难句的使用，会为文章添彩；文中学术词汇使用较丰富，但是拼写错误比较多；衔接成分太少，文章结构欠佳。

The chart shows that there are more and more people in this city choose to travel.From 10000 in1995 multiplied to over 120000 in 2005,we can kown that a increasing number of people have chance and are willing to leave for a trip.It arise us thingking that what are the reasons leading to this phenomenon? There are two reasons mainly accounting for this change.To begin with,the economy development brings benefits to people livelihood.The progress in economy offers various opportunities to earn money for the residents,so they can affort the expense that travel needs.What is more,the values of people have changed.In the past decade,people realized the importance of entertainment rather than work.Enjoying life became a trend for people,getting risk of the idea that money should be put to the first place. In my view,this change has posstive impacts on our society,as well as on personal development.To our society, travelling is beneficial to the consume level,which promte society to move on.As to individual,people really have chance to enjoy life rather than be a slave to the money.They will live happily,which it is the persuit of people.