2006年6月英语六级作文真题:关于旅游

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The chart shows us that more and more people in this city choose to travel.From 10000 in1995 multiplied to over 120000 in 2005,we can kown that a increasing number of people are intended and are willing to leaving for a trip.It arises our thingking that what are the reasons leading to this phenomenon? There are two reasons mainly accounting for this change.To begin with,the economy development brings benefits to people livelihood.The progress in economy offers various opportunities for the residents to earn money,so they can affort the expense that travel needs.What is more,the values of people have changed.In the past decade,people realized the importance of entertainment rather than work.Enjoying life became a trend for people,who got risk of the idea that money should be put to the first place. In my view,this change has posstive impacts on both our society and personal development.To our society, travelling is beneficial to the consume level,which promotes society to move on.As to individual,people really have chance to enjoy life rather than be a slave to the money.They will live happily,which it is the persuit of the most of us.