2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；不能熟练使用过渡词，基本没有衔接词；文中词汇表达贫乏，单词拼写也要认真；连词使用偏少。

As time goes by, our coming in 21 centery which is a more moden and development socienty. and computer ,which is the best discriptionare becoming more and more dairy goods. every people have a computer in every place. the computer can help the humbens do many things and they can hardly do every thingd which the peoples can do. SO the computer is our friends and assistant. the computer have nice point ,in the convert it have shortless. when the computer face the world ,there are many games come out. and more and more people are into the games world.and the age of the people are becoming more and more younger.