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初中英语命题作文真题演练(92):为建设节约型社会献一计

发布时间:2014-02-19 17:48浏览次数:1330
要求:
你校学生会办的《英语月报》开展“为建设节约型社会献一计”活动.你提出一个建议:鼓励毕业的学生把参考书以及课本留给下一级的学生使用。
你的理由是:1.可以节省资源,减少浪费;
2.书上的笔记很有用;
 3.国外(如澳大利亚)已有成功的做法;
4.其他。
请你用英语写一篇80词左右的短文向编辑部投稿。
注意:(1)不要逐字逐句翻译。(2)文章的开头已给出,不计入总词数。

参考词汇:资源natural resource;节约型社会an energy-saving society


 As we know, when junior students graduate from school, most of their reference books as well as textbooks are thrown away.
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文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用学术词汇就更好了;文中使用了简单的连接词和过渡词;能够使用一些简单的从句;请注意分段。

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As we know, when junior students graduate from school, most of their reference books as well as textbooks are thrown away.And now,I suggest that they shouldn't throw them,the junior students can give the old book to the new students.Because that can save the natural resource,and reduce the waste.The another reason is,the note on the old book is useful to the new students,the notes can help the new students study well.Then,other country such as Australia has had do it successfully.And we can make the an energy-saving society by doing that,we also can make our Earth more beautiful by doing that.Lastly,let start out small from now on,we can make our home more beautiful,just do it!

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