2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

文中词汇表达不够丰富，要多积累学术词汇；作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；可适当增加连接词和衔接词的使用。

As time goes by, our coming in the 21 century which is a more modern and development society. and the computer are come out which is the best invention in the century and them become diary goods. every people have a computer in every family. the computer can help the humans do many things and they can hardly do every things which the humans can do. SO the computer is friends and assistant for the humans. the computer have strong point ,in the convert it have shortcomings as well.when the computer face the world ,there are many games come out. and more and more people are into the games world.and the age of the people are becoming more and more younger.