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"If we don’t save water,the last drop of water will be a teardrop."that tell us,the water is very important. Firstly,we can't live without water,if without water,we will all die.Secondly,the amount of water suitable to drink is less and less these days,I think one day we will have no water to drink.Then,the water pollute is become very serious,the river,the lake are all polluted by people. Because the water is important for us,we should protect the water resource,as a student,we should try our beat to ask people to recycle water.And we should stop people from pouring the waste water into the lake or river.Lastly.we can start out small from now on,we can protect the water by ourselves!