初中英语命题作文真题演练(89):生活离不开水

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parents give us the first life, water give us the second life. we can't live without water, for example, washing fruits or clothes need water and when thristy we have to drink water.water is so important in our life we must learn to protect it, but accoding to a survey the amount of water suitable to drink is too little to satisfy demand. notw it is time for us to take measures to protect it. i want to give some suggestions, fistly, we can reuse the water .sencond, the gorvenment should enhance the education about how to protect water.