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2012年12月英语六级作文真题(I):保持信任

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题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任

字数:150满分:100分

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文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用学术词汇就更好了;可适当增加文中长句和复杂句的使用;全文结构较为严谨,应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。

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As we know, trust is very important in our daily life. If you do not believe others, you can not feel happy as you always suspect others.No matter who we know, we should trust them. First,we trust others meanwhile they trust ours, which is a good foundation to trust each other.Second, in some special circumstances, if you choose trust them, which is equal to give them encouragement and confidence. It is incredible that others also can do this for us if we need. Third,if we choose trust others, we will make more friends and get easy on with others.Last but not least,trust others can make our society more prosperous and develop smoothly. In my opinion, i think we can not live without trust. Our family needs trust , our society needs trust,our country needs trust,no matter where we go ,no matter what we do,no matter who we meet, all of this world ,we need trust.we should keep trust in mind firmly.

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