2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

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From above Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey,we can know that the lower diploma ,the unemployment rate is higher. Why ?With the world's developing so fast,society need workers with full of knowledge and having team spirts,besides the most important thing is that they have capacity of doing this work.