2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

可适当增加从句的使用；文章用词太过单一，要仔细检查单词拼写；文章结构欠严谨，基本没有衔接成分；连词使用偏少。

Computer and Man With the development of technology ,computer plays a imporent role in our daily life.Gradualy man depend on computer more and more. There is denying that computer has many advantages .For example hen we have some knowledge we don't know .we can find the answer.Otherwise the news about abort country we can get information . However,man