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托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第46篇:是否每个人都有接受高等教育的权力

发布时间:2013-08-16 17:30浏览次数:3022
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作文题目:

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? 

One argument states that higher education should be open to everyone, regardless of background. The opposing argument says that only the elite students should be allowed to proceed.

Discuss these ideas. Explain why.

是否每个人都有接受高等教育的权力。你的看法是?并给出解释。

字数要求:300字以内。

用户的作文(系统评分68.5分
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文中应适当增加从句和长难句的使用;文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词,结构比较严谨;作者学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间,词汇表达灵活性也要提高,单词拼写错误较多;请注意分段。

用户练习作文:

today there is a comman argument that whether all the students are entitled to receive higer education.Some argues that everybody should be equal between the right of education no matter how smart he is;while some hold a different view that only the elites should be enrolled in higer education since it is favorable to make the use of education resource to the full extend.As for me,i would like to say that higer education should be enjoyed by everyone. there are several reasons to support this opinino.First of all.we should stick to the rule of placing human beings the first.Every resident should be equal,not only in the education area but also other relevant areas.second,higer education for all the students is beneficial to the civilization prosperity in China.With more people being educated,our spirital construcation will make new progress.

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