2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

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Archery has a long history, originally used for hunting and war. The archer is the hunter, they use arrow to hunting animal survive. Later, bow and arrow into a war of terrible weapons. In 5000 BC, the ancient Egyptians mastered how to use a bow and arrow. Ancient civilizations, the bow is used very popular weapon. Modern archery first appeared in the United Kingdom, England, Yorkshire since 1673 at the side Scotton Silver Arrow competition, continues to this day. Royal Archery Association was set up in 1787, and become the world's first archery organization. China archery is also very popular, especially in minority areas better, the annual festival of ethnic minorities are held mincouxingshi archery competition. Such as Inner Mongolia "of the screen," the General Assembly traditional horseback archery, archery competition.