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正确句子比例较高，适当增加复杂句的使用，文章会更出色；作者能较熟练地使用丰富的词汇，但请加强单词拼写的检查；层次不清晰，几乎没有使用衔接词。
ladies and gentlemen. good evening!welcome to our English evening.first,let me say something about our class. our class have cute 26 boys and 24 girls, in ours class, everybody have english books, linsen to the videos ,and talk about the weather. second, a part classmates inspecially like chat about english joke,story,even talk with others in daily time. i very love the talk way.of course ,i wish people understand me what i saw. in life time ,i have a good habite ,that's remenber words. third, the meet including about opera,song,dance and so on ,i hope everybody have funny .thanks . i hope you will like the program and have a good time. thank you .
