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正确句子比例较高，适当增加复杂句的使用，文章会更出色；词汇表达较灵活准确，学术词汇使用过少，另外注意文中个别的拼写错误；层次不清晰，几乎没有使用衔接词。
Ladies and gentlemen. Good evening!welcome to our English evening.first,let me say something about our class. our class have cute 26 boys and 24 girls, in ours class, everybody have English books, listen to the videos ,and talk about the weather. second, a part classmates enspecially like chat about English joke,story,even talk with others in daily time. i very love the talk way.of course ,i wish people understand me what i saw. in life time ,i have a good habit ,that's remeber words. third, the meet including about opera,song,dance and so on ,i hope everybody have funny .thanks . I hope you will like the program and have a good time. thank you .
