文章词汇表达比较灵活,学术词汇的使用要继续加强;正确句子比例较高,适当增加复杂句的使用,文章会更出色;层次不清晰,几乎没有使用衔接词。
Ladies and gentlemen. Good evening! Welcome to our English evening.First,let me say something about our class. our class has cute 26 boys and 24 girls, in our class, everybody has an English book, listen to the videos,and talk about the weather. Second, a part classmates especially like chat about English joke,story,even talk with others in daily life. I very love the talk way.Of course, I wish people understand me what I saw. In life time, I have a good habit ,that's remember words. Third, the meet including about opera,song,dance and so on, I hope everybody have funny. thanks. I hope you will like the program and have a good time. Thank you.