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初中英语命题作文真题演练(33):英语晚会

发布时间:2013-12-19 17:34浏览次数:440
要求:
一些美国朋友要来参观你们班举办的英语晚会。作为主持人,请你用英语准备一份80词左右的欢迎辞。欢迎辞包括以下内容:
l、班级情况(男生26人,女生24人);
2、业余时间学英语的情况(看英语书籍、报纸,用英语讲故事,收听英语广播等);
3、晚会的节目(短剧、歌曲、跳舞等)。
要求:语言连贯得体,书写规范,卷面整洁。
Ladies and gentlemen,
Good evening! Welcome to our English evening.First, let me say something about our class.
 
 
I hope you will like the program and have a good time. Thank you.
用户的作文(系统评分63.5分
评语:

文章词汇表达比较灵活,学术词汇的使用要继续加强;正确句子比例较高,适当增加复杂句的使用,文章会更出色;层次不清晰,几乎没有使用衔接词。

用户练习作文:

Ladies and gentlemen. Good evening! Welcome to our English evening.First,let me say something about our class. our class has cute 26 boys and 24 girls, in our class, everybody has an English book, listen to the videos,and talk about the weather. Second, a part classmates especially like chat about English joke,story,even talk with others in daily life. I very love the talk way.Of course, I wish people understand me what I saw. In life time, I have a good habit ,that's remember words. Third, the meet including about opera,song,dance and so on, I hope everybody have funny. thanks. I hope you will like the program and have a good time. Thank you.

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