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2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

发布时间:2013-05-18 11:00浏览次数:17423
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题目:Computer and Man人与电脑

字数:150满分:100分

用户的作文(系统评分78.0分
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拼写做的很棒,在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;句式变化多样,句法方面做的很棒;文中衔接词丰富;请注意分段;请提高文章内敛性,段落和句子要围绕主题展开。

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The equipment has crept forward in its technology since Robin and his merry men had the run of Sherwood Forest, but the sport of archery remains essentially unchanged. A recurve bow coated in fibreglass has become standard, and arrows made of aluminium and carbon graphite can travel more than 240km/h, but the most important requirements are straightforward: steady hands, strong shoulders, flexible muscles, sharp eyes and nerves of steel. Archery was a feature of the Olympic Games several times from 1900 to 1920, but then disappeared for more than 50 years. It reappeared at Munich in 1972 and has remained a fixture ever since.

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