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A great number of universities are intended to rank,according to different standards.Some of them are ranked by the students' graduation rate,some of them just compete with each others on the resources they own.Such phenomenon causes a heat debate about university ranking. Some people hold a positive attitude toward the ranking.On the one hand,they think it a good way to promote uninversities to make progress under the fierce competition.And universities will spare no effort to improve their teaching quality,which finally benefits the students.On the other hand,the university ranking shows the position of the campus,helping students to choose schools they really want.However,there are still a part of people having the opposite viwe..To begin with,they do not consider it a wise decision to divide the school into different levels with the thought that various universities have diverse advantages and no standard can be exactly made.What is worse,over-ranking are harmful to students who fail to be accepted by their dream university and increase the pressure on the students. In my eye,I support the former opinion.University ranking are able to offer incentives both to schools and students.
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