2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

作者学术词汇积累做的很棒，但有个别拼写错误；全文结构较为严谨；适当增加一些从句的使用，会为文章添彩。

With the Internet technology being popular,people spend more and more time on the Internet, no wonder that people communicate with others less.Obviously,It's a serious problem that should arise our attention. Commiting to computers will rise many problems.Firstly,it cause that we have less time to chat with others in daily life.Then,there will be terrible interpersonal relationship because we are indifferent to others when it takes us too much time on the internet.Secondly,it has bad effects on our health if we are addicted to the computers.Many people,eapecially adolescents,have weak self-control.When they find the game or the television is interesting,they will proceed with it and ignore their own formal timetable.The last but not least,addicted to the Internet may intensify a person's lonely emptiness.As you are satisfied with what happend on the inernet,you actually find there are no changes in real life,whay you will feel,apparently it is similar to feel depress. How to avoid above negative impacts,we should learn to set goals for ourselves and