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2013年考研英语作文预测话题:沟通的意义

发布时间:2013-08-23 17:28浏览次数:13013
要求:

题目要求:

围绕沟通的意义写一篇小文章。简明阐述自己的观点。

字数要求:

200字以内

用户的作文(系统评分79.0分
评语:

拼写很棒,可适当增加学术词汇的使用;句法知识扎实,可适当增加长句的使用;行为稍欠流畅,过渡词用的还可以。

用户练习作文:

In the picture there have three trashcan.Nearby,an old man told the other people that everyone do not leave litter , it’s our responsibilities .” What we need to pay attention to is the fact that what is being described in the picture is not a specific situation, but a very common phenomenon in our life¬---drop litter. As far as I know, it’s very important to protect the environment. On the one hand, If we leave litter anywhere, our lives would have garbage everywhere, not only make us feel dirty, but also breeding ground for bacteria. On the other hand, if we consciously to do garbage sorting, it is convenient to garbage cycling and keep clean. And we can use them to generate electricity. All in all, we should try our best to protect environment, it’s our responsibilities.

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