作者词汇表达较为熟练,学术词汇使用不是很多;过渡词很丰富,衔接词同时使用的恰到好处;很好的运用了从句,同时句法错误极少。
Firstly,we should have healthy eating habits,such as eat more vegetables and less meat,drink more water.Secondly,we should go to bed early and get up early,and we should make sure we have more than 8 hours to sleep,so that we can have energy to study or work.Thirdly,we should go out to da sports often,and we have better do exercise every day because do sports can make us body stronger and stronger. We are student,it is important to make ourselves health,because we are still young! Lastly,I hope everyone can be healthy,good luck,everybody.