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初中英语命题作文真题演练(79):健康的生活习惯

发布时间:2014-02-18 16:33浏览次数:398
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健康的生活习惯在我们成长中至关重要的。你认为健康的生活习惯应该是什么样子的?请根据下面的信息提示,写一篇短文,首句已经给。
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1.healthy eating habits
2.go to bed early and get up early
3.take more exercise.
I think healthy habits are very important for us.
用户的作文(系统评分71.0分
评语:

作者词汇表达较为熟练,学术词汇使用不是很多;很好的运用了从句,同时句法错误极少;全文结构较为严谨。

用户练习作文:

Firstly,we should have healthy eating habits,such as eating more vegetables and less meat,drink more water.Secondly,we should go to bed early and get up early,and we should make sure we have more than 8 hours to sleep,so that we can have energy to study or work.Thirdly,we should go out to da sports often,and we have better do exercise every day because do sports can make us body stronger and stronger. As a student,it is important to make ourselves health,because we are still young! Lastly,I hope everyone can be healthy,good luck,everybody.

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