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2011年6月英语六级作文真题:热衷证书考试

发布时间:2013-05-18 10:46浏览次数:3100
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题目 My opinion on certificate craze
要求
1.现在许多人热衷于各类证书考试
2.其目的各不相同
3.在我看来……
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行文稍显不流畅,应增加文中衔接词的使用;句法知识不错,多多加强复杂句的练习;文中词汇表达较灵活丰富,不过请检查文章的单词拼写;请注意分段。

用户练习作文:

Nowadays,many people have been enthusiastic about all kinds of examanition. Someone called it certificate craze. This people have diffrent purpose. Some of those mabey because of pressure that come from their heart.They frighten to future,they can't ensure that they have enough skill to spend rest of life.Many people did it just in order to find a good job.Others maybe influent by their peer.In my opinion, first of all,certificate is important,but is't most important.The most important is the skill.Certificate just tell others that you master the skill,if you don't,it just a unuseful paper.Secondly,we don't need drift with other people,just do something that you like it.Otherwise,you wasting your life.

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