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Nowadays,many people have been enthusiastic about all kinds of examanition. Someone called it certificate craze. This people have diffrent purpose. Some of those mabey because of pressure that come from their heart.They frighten to future,they can't ensure that they have enough skill to spend rest of life.Many people did it just in order to find a good job.Others maybe influent by their peer.In my opinion, first of all,certificate is important,but is't most important.The most important is the skill.Certificate just tell others that you master the skill,if you don't,it just a unuseful paper.Secondly,we don't need drift with other people,just do something that you like it.Otherwise,you wasting your life.