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2012年2月25日雅思大作文真题:大学生是否应多参与业余活动

发布时间:2013-08-02 17:03浏览次数:3058
要求:

【题目要求

Full-time university students need to spend a lot of time studying, but it is essential to involve other activities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

【题目翻译】

全日制大学生需要花很多时间学习,但是也应该参加其它活动。你在多大程度上同意或不同意?

【关键词分析】

other activities

这是一个范围很广的词,包括课外活动、社交活动、义务劳动、兼职工作等。因此这道题目的展开的余地非常广。

【话题分类与题型】

本题是新题,属于教育类话题,题型为同意与否(单观点)。教育类话题是往年出现最高频的题目,上一次出现这类话题是在2012年1月14日。

【话题评价】

这道题目属于教育类话题,属于“社会实践”类分支,但是和“教育内容”这个分支也有很大的相似之处。虽然本题没有直接在雅思考试中出现过,但是类似的题目已经出现过无数次了,在G类考试中也多次出现。考生只要准备过相关的话题,就一定有话可说。

【类似话题】

1. Some people believe that some unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmes (e.g. working in a charity, improving the relationship of neighbourhood or teaching sports to children). To what extent do you agree or disagree?

2. Some school leavers travel or work for a period of time instead of going directly to university. What are the advantages and disadvantages?

3. Some students do part-time jobs during studying. Do you think it has more advantages or disadvantages?

4. Schools should concentrate on teaching children academic subjects which are useful in their future careers. Subjects like music and sports are not important. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion

【结构与思路】

本题建议采取双边支持型,同意题目中的观点。建议采取五段式,正文的前两段花主要篇幅讲课外活动及社会实践的重要性,侧重点从培养学生的能力出发。正文第三段让步,承认学习的重要性。结论是学生应该在不影响学习的前提下参加课外活动及社会实践。

用户的作文(系统评分90.5分
评语:

文章词汇表达丰富,学术词汇积累做的也很棒;作者有一定功底,可在平时练习中增加长难句的记忆;有效地使用了语句间的衔接成分。

用户练习作文:

When it comes to whether full-time university students shall spend time involving other activities,people's opinions diverse greatly.Some say it is basically a waste of time and students are busy in studying,so it is not essential to involve other activities.The argument seems self-evident,but in fact requires closer examination. It is undeniable that academic subjects can give students some fundamental knowledge and they can learn new skills.So they should spend a large number of time and energy to learn.And as the increasing of knowledge,the students enlarge their vision and enhance their innovation.Therefore,full-time university students shall study hard and focus on learning. We can hardly lose the sight of the fact that part-time jobs shall reduce the expense of family and enhance the level of students' life.Doing part-time jobs not only cultivate the spirit of independence but also increase the ability of students to adapt to the society.Besides,in China,most of the companies like to recruit people who have the experience of society.That is to say,if students take part in other activities,they will have more chance to get better jobs. Admittedly,other activities such as listening to music,going for sports and involving in club activities are crucial for students' development for they can give students many things beyond academic learning,including endurance,teamwork spirit and healthy physical body.If students only focus on learning and ignore other activities,it will be a big loss. From the above discussion,it is clear that full-time university students shall take part in other activities as long as it does not interfere with their studies.After all,we hope new generations with all-round development.

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