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2011年高考英语卷写作表达题目范文汇总(93):志愿者

发布时间:2013-08-30 16:53浏览次数:290
要求:
目前,一种新的时尚正在美国社会流行――当志愿者。据报道,每年约有一亿零九百万名美国人担任志愿者,占美国成年人的56%。大多数人每周当志愿者约三个半小时。志愿者或做家教,教小孩子阅读、算术,或打扫公园与街道,或到医院或疗养院帮忙。
你愿意做志愿者吗?请陈述理由。
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学术词汇使用较丰富,拼写做的很棒;可适当增加从句和复杂句使用;衔接成分太少,文章结构欠佳;请注意分段。

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None of a Chinese will forget the Beijing Olympics,even more no one will forget the capital business card-the smile of volunteers,called never fade smile circle . There were about 1700000 volunteers who offered service for the Beijing Olympics.Actually,an increasing number of people become volunteers every year in China.According to statistics,in 2012 the number of registering volunteers has more than 30 million in China. Volunteer service has many meanings.On the one hand,it can help people in need,bring hope,warmth and change to people.And make the best use of social resources,enhance citizens' sense of belonging.On the other hand,for individuals,can expand the circle of life,people can experience more social things,deepen the understanding of society,also can develop their organization and leadership skills. From my viewpoint,volunteer activities pass love,spread of civilization.As modern college students,we should involve in volunteering actions.This on the society and our people is good but no harm.

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