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Recently,with the development of economic,internet goes to our daily life.with the time being ,internet becomes more and more popular.but there are some people think the internet can make the useful of work and study ,which makes them think the internet plays important role in teens,however others think internet likes the things of drug,what has bad influence on students.to make them don not like study. As far as I am concerned,whatever the thing is ,it has advantages and disadvantages.there are not have the thing which only has the benefit in the world.For internet,on the one hand,It is convenient for people to find stuffs to study,and also,we can experience the benefits around the world,likes online shopping.on the other hand,It is has bad things,which brings the difficult for us.likes someone get money through the internet with the sharp practice ,so we should use the internet in right way.
