小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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Xiao ming is my good friend. He is very findly.He is eight year's old. he is behind me. He is talking loudly.Xiao ming is my good friend. He is very findly.He is eight year's old. he is behind me. He is talking loudly.Xiao ming is my good friend. He is very findly.He is eight year's old. he is behind me. He is talking loudly.