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should one expect a reward when doing a good deed Nowadays,with the development of the sociaty,people become more and more civiliration.they always did some good deeds to help others.but,should one expect a reward when doing a good deeds?different people have different views. there are some people think that people who have offered a help to others should be reward,because they can be encouraged by the bonus and do more good deeds .however,the opposed believe that people are not deserved to ask for a reward just like leifeng .in their opinions,the people who helped others in need are not willing to do good deeds if there is no reward. as for me, i always know that it is a beautiful thing to help others.so don't desire to reward,just devoting our a little time and emergy,the world will be more wonderful.