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Should one expect a reward when doing a good deed Nowadays,with the development of the society,people become more and more civilization.They always did some good deeds to help others.But,should one expect a reward when doing a good deed?Different people have different views. There are some people think that people who have offered a help to others should be reward.Because they can be encouraged by the bonus and do more good deeds .However,the opposed believe that people are not deserved to ask for a reward just like Lei Feng .In their opinions,the people who helped others in need are not willing to do good deeds if there is no reward. As for me, I always know that it is a beautiful thing to help others.so don't desire to reward,Just devoting us a little time and energy,the world will be more wonderful.