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2007年6月英语六级作文真题:学雷锋

发布时间:2013-05-14 23:47浏览次数:1092
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Should one expect a reward when doing a good deed 
1.有的人认为应该有回报 
2.另外的人认为应该象雷锋一样不要回报 
3.我的看法 
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文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用学术词汇就更好了;文章在句法方面做的很棒,从句和复杂句的使用不错;上下文衔接不流畅,文章结构不严谨。

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Should one expect a reward when doing a good deed Nowadays,with the development of the society,people become more and more civilization.They always did some good deeds to help others.But,should one expect a reward when doing a good deed?Different people have different views. There are some people think that people who have offered a help to others should be reward.Because they can be encouraged by the bonus and do more good deeds .However,the opposed believe that people are not deserved to ask for a reward just like Lei Feng .In their opinions,the people who helped others in need are not willing to do good deeds if there is no reward. As for me, I always know that it is a beautiful thing to help others.so don't desire to reward,Just devoting us a little time and energy,the world will be more wonderful.

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