2012年6月英语四级作文真题:过度包装的现象

文中词汇表达稍欠丰富，但单词拼写做的很棒；行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用；复杂句的使用不是很丰富；请注意分段。

Food waste has been a chronic problem for restaurants and grocery stores . so some of them try to cut food waste in novel ways. For example , they are tracking their food with software systems and making food in smaller packages . in other words ,today a majority of products