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2013年考研英语作文预测话题:沟通的意义

发布时间:2013-08-23 17:28浏览次数:13039
要求:

题目要求:

围绕沟通的意义写一篇小文章。简明阐述自己的观点。

字数要求:

200字以内

用户的作文(系统评分87.5分
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词汇表达灵活多样请继续保持,不过学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间;可适当增加从句和复杂句使用;过渡词和衔接词使用的比较不错;请注意分段。

用户练习作文:

With the development of science, pollution is more and more serious. As a teenager, I have the responsibility to help reduce pollution. The things what I can do are as follows. Firstly, I always reuse plastic bags or directly buy reusable shopping bags. If everyone does so when shopping, it will rapidly reduce white pollution which influences beautiful environment and animals and plants badly and save a lot of resources. At the same time, I can reduce using other disposable items, such as using handkerchiefs and bowls rather than paper towels and fast food boxes. As is known to us all, disposable items not only waste a number of resources and increase our cost, but also cause pollution. There are so many disadvantages, so recycling is of importance and we should use things which can be recycled as many as possible. For example, reducing single-sided paper and using double-sided copying. Secondly, I always save energy by turning off the television and the lights witch every time I leave home. Many home electronic products use energy when they are off, so we should unplug when we leave a long time. Not only will we pay less on energy bills, we will reduce emissions from coal-fired electricity plants. I consider this is a good habit and an easy way to reduce pollution. The last but not least, I use the washing machine with full loads so that I can save money. What’s more, it can reduce using energy and detergents which increases nutrient. We all realize that we must try our best to improve our environment and there are a number of approaches which are beneficial to environment. However, some people always forget to do them. Therefore, it is of significance to share the benefits of a recycling program and excellence ways with friends. Only everyone takes measures to protect environment, it’s likely to prevent pollution as soon as possible.

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