2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

衔接词和过渡词用的很不错；句法知识不错，多多加强复杂句的练习；作者学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间，词汇表达灵活性也要提高，单词拼写错误较多。

Computer and Man Nowadays ,with the rapid development of science and techology,the use of computer is commonly phenomenon. Computer ,on one hand ,in a great sense ,has brought people many convenience,for people can get easy access to many special programs ,such as programs of concern、sports and affairs occuring all over the world.However, it bother a lot of people as well.For example,computer isolate familes ,especially for a family with the children that are indulged in computer ganmes. From the above disscused.we can conclude that we should be very cautiou while using computer rather than just being misled by them .