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As the Internet developed,it makes greatly effect of Online-Shoppin's flourish.At the meantime,Online Shopping favors to the most people. Why does Online Shopping popularized,it is not doubt that it brings an amount of convenience for us.Primarily,online shopping have facilitated the economic development in our nation.Secondly,in our daily life, it greatly and deeply improves our convenience，last but not least,we could easily purchase the latest commodities from other countries than ever before. However, inevitably,A coin has two sides,thus Online shopping also has a disadvantage to us in some way, due to internet's elements. For example, not only will buy a low-quality goods online,but it will impact on our safety. According to the cons I have listed,I suggest that,in my opinion, we must be extremely careful while we intend to purchase online,and it is essential for us to confirm the reputation of the store whether being reliable.If you were tricked,it is a responsibility for you reporting it right away. Lastly,I hope that online shopping will be fashionable.
